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Sorry, I deleted the other one by mistake. Fuuu- X_X
OLD DESCRIPTION: Before I go on, you are
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Now back to the main point,
this is my first pixel art piece and I really need to improve. PLEASE critique this ;7;
I made the base and everything.
I know the left ear is cut off slightly, so please don't critique me on that. ;n;
This is my Oc, Zynyx. I love Zyn so much. Thank you Hibi <3
So yeah, please critique oTL
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liyaperfidious
Dec 4, 2012
Mmm. I agree with the previous comment.
I think it's better if you lengthen the time of intervals between each blink, otherwise it looks unnatural.
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DragonA7X
Dec 5, 2012
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I agree with you. I kind of wish I added another closed eye frame in there.
Thank you for the input.
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liyaperfidious
Dec 6, 2012
You're welcome.
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SephycalA7X
Dec 3, 2012
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It looks amazing! :3
A little suggesting from me, slow down the animation a little? c: It seems too fast, unless that's just me. XD But you really made each frame look nice, and the body is epic!
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DragonA7X
Dec 5, 2012
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I totally agree with you. I'll keep that in mind next time.
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SephycalA7X
Dec 5, 2012
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Glad I could help you buddy!
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TheSword-TheFaith
Dec 3, 2012
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You should explain to me how you make it move. O_O
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DragonA7X
Dec 3, 2012
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One word.
Photoshop
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TheSword-TheFaith
Dec 3, 2012
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I can't figure out Photoshop though. ;-;
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DragonA7X
Dec 3, 2012
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I am not the best at explaining things though ;A;
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