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CRITIQUE THIS PLS by DragonA7X CRITIQUE THIS PLS by DragonA7X
Sorry, I deleted the other one by mistake. Fuuu- X_X

OLD DESCRIPTION: Before I go on, you are NOT allowed to use this in any way, shape or form.

Now back to the main point, :XD: this is my first pixel art piece and I really need to improve. PLEASE critique this ;7;

I made the base and everything.
I know the left ear is cut off slightly, so please don't critique me on that. ;n;

This is my Oc, Zynyx. I love Zyn so much. Thank you Hibi <3

So yeah, please critique oTL
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:iconmirage-moonlight:
Mirage-Moonlight Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013
Like others have said, maybe slow down the animation a little?
Otherwise, I really love this <3
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:icondragona7x:
DragonA7X Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my gosh, this is so old. >A>
Thank you for the critique. <3
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:iconliyaperfidious:
liyaperfidious Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012
Mmm. I agree with the previous comment.
I think it's better if you lengthen the time of intervals between each blink, otherwise it looks unnatural.
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:icondragona7x:
DragonA7X Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I agree with you. I kind of wish I added another closed eye frame in there.
Thank you for the input.
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:iconliyaperfidious:
liyaperfidious Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012
You're welcome.
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:iconsephycala7x:
SephycalA7X Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It looks amazing! :3
A little suggesting from me, slow down the animation a little? c: It seems too fast, unless that's just me. XD But you really made each frame look nice, and the body is epic! :D
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:icondragona7x:
DragonA7X Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I totally agree with you. I'll keep that in mind next time.
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:iconsephycala7x:
SephycalA7X Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Glad I could help you buddy! :aww:
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:iconthesword-thefaith:
TheSword-TheFaith Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You should explain to me how you make it move. O_O
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:icondragona7x:
DragonA7X Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
One word.
Photoshop
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:iconthesword-thefaith:
TheSword-TheFaith Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I can't figure out Photoshop though. ;-;
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:icondragona7x:
DragonA7X Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I am not the best at explaining things though ;A;
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:iconthesword-thefaith:
TheSword-TheFaith Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
But.. It moves. Mine doesn't movee.
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:icondragona7x:
DragonA7X Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You need to make a frame for each movement. For example, mine has 3 different ones. It helps to save the image into multiple files, go to one of the copies and edit it frame by frame. It's easier done than said XD

Once finished, go to iaza and upload each frame. Meh. I suck XD
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:iconthesword-thefaith:
TheSword-TheFaith Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I think I got this. :I
Thank you.
Maybe.
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:icondragona7x:
DragonA7X Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I hope it all works out XD
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