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CRITIQUE THIS PLS by DragonA7X CRITIQUE THIS PLS by DragonA7X
Sorry, I deleted the other one by mistake. Fuuu- X_X

OLD DESCRIPTION: Before I go on, you are NOT allowed to use this in any way, shape or form.

Now back to the main point, :XD: this is my first pixel art piece and I really need to improve. PLEASE critique this ;7;

I made the base and everything.
I know the left ear is cut off slightly, so please don't critique me on that. ;n;

This is my Oc, Zynyx. I love Zyn so much. Thank you Hibi <3

So yeah, please critique oTL
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:iconmirage-moonlight:
Mirage-Moonlight Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013
Like others have said, maybe slow down the animation a little?
Otherwise, I really love this <3
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:icondragona7x:
DragonA7X Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my gosh, this is so old. >A>
Thank you for the critique. <3
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:iconliyaperfidious:
liyaperfidious Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012
Mmm. I agree with the previous comment.
I think it's better if you lengthen the time of intervals between each blink, otherwise it looks unnatural.
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:icondragona7x:
DragonA7X Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I agree with you. I kind of wish I added another closed eye frame in there.
Thank you for the input.
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:iconliyaperfidious:
liyaperfidious Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012
You're welcome.
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:iconsephycala7x:
SephycalA7X Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It looks amazing! :3
A little suggesting from me, slow down the animation a little? c: It seems too fast, unless that's just me. XD But you really made each frame look nice, and the body is epic! :D
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:icondragona7x:
DragonA7X Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I totally agree with you. I'll keep that in mind next time.
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:iconsephycala7x:
SephycalA7X Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Glad I could help you buddy! :aww:
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:iconthesword-thefaith:
TheSword-TheFaith Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You should explain to me how you make it move. O_O
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:icondragona7x:
DragonA7X Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
One word.
Photoshop
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